Editing services

Hi, if you’ve edited your work as much as you can and friends have given you all the information they are capable of, you can look at being professionally edited. The costs vary and the quality of editing varies as well. I’ve had my work edited through The Story Mint and find them to be …

Was and Were slow a sentence down and make it boring!

When writing or reading do you notice the word “was” being used a lot? I’ve been recently informed by an editor that it slows writing down because it can make a scene less immediate. Also “was” can make a sentence boring. Here are some examples:“A table was in the room” does not sound as good …