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Monthly Archives: May 2013
Was and Were slow a sentence down and make it boring!
When writing or reading do you notice the word “was” being used a lot? I’ve been recently informed by an editor that it slows writing down because it can make a scene less immediate. Also “was” can make a sentence boring. Here are some examples:“A table was in the room” does not sound as good …
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Meat Vs Veg
Do we need to eat meat? Yes and no. Many thousands of years ago we became omnivores, which means we can eat meat when available or vegetables, nuts and fruit, etc. when it is not. And Vise-versa.With modern farming we have both available to us at a whim so we can now choose what we …